Nice and tight
Malformed and maladjustedAll emotion is encrusted Wrapped up nice and tight Out of predatory sight The hands become defiant To the bad things reliantA final clutching grasp Like the jaws and venom of...
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Perfect rhyme and meter Jay.This is really well written good stuff!Good word usage, really enjoyed, thanks!Nightlife calls me.Through her I am free.It's the only way to be,all caught up in a...
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Deathletter well written with a strong verse. Keep writing it will set you free. BillthesongmanNothing real can be threatened.Nothing unreal exists.Herein lies the peace of God.A Course in MIracles
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Loved it Jay.. it touched so many shadows in my mind !!soz... my bad ... my mind is scattered in so many areas!!!Visit me at Virtutis gloria mercesGarg'n Uair Dhuisgear
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